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 Post subject: Name Plate Animation
PostPosted: 12 Sep 2013, 01:46 
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Since I entered the life of a youtuber, I have learned the trade of making intros. Cod sent me this masterpiece of a nameplate, so I though why not share it with him and the rest of the SpA Community. Hope you enjoy!

Good work on that signature you made for me Cod, Its epic :p

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sc5Qbyqn ... e=youtu.be

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 Post subject: Re: Name Plate Animation
PostPosted: 12 Sep 2013, 01:49 
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Let me cut to the chase.
• Too shaky and unclear
• The lightning looks crappy
• The "name" is too unclear
• The cutout is too sharp http://puu.sh/4p281.jpg

• Idea is edible
• The fade in the end works
• With music the entirety might work, but still, wouldn't look professional

EDIT: This is an improvement, but doesn't add a bit to the entirety.

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 Post subject: Re: Name Plate Animation
PostPosted: 15 Sep 2013, 22:38 
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I'll give you some handy tips.

First of all, that intro is waaaaaaay too long. 9 - 10 seconds is far too much. Check out a lot of big youtubers. Most of the intros are 2-3 seconds at max.

A lot of of the intro also seems unnecessary. After the shaking at the start, the word just kinda clips back into place and looks very odd. Perhaps make the text smaller so that when it's shaking it goes back into place nicely. The lightning looks kinda odd. Finally the text flip is just a bit much in my opinion.

But don't let this feedback get you down. see it as the opposite. Also remembe most of these are all just opinion too ^^

I look forward to seeing more from you :mrgreen:

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 Post subject: Re: Name Plate Animation
PostPosted: 15 Sep 2013, 23:31 
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Thanks for the feedback :P I wish I had cinema so I could do more animation effects. Unfortunately, all I have is adobe premier. I can fix the length and the different effects. Nothing I can really do with the lighting as far as the animation goes. That's just how the pic was from Cod. Anyways, I will work on a photo a bit for my account when I get [SpA]. Or if.... ;)

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